Bang bang bang there goes it like drums
A testis sound like a mouse
A tapatata sound like a bird
A grey bushy cloud surrounded by air
wet rains on the floor like mats
smelling wood dust like smelling thin air
smelling air like soft clouds
feeling excited but mostly proud
feeling cold like ice block on my face
feeling wet like soaking hair
feeling happy like pinkalicious marshmallow in my mouth
feeling loved like a red heart filled with marshmallow
Great job, TEV. NICE RHIMING. And thanks for your comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH AND REALLY MEAN GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks Jenna that is so kind of you
awesome job Tev
you too
Hey tevelenga, how’s new Zealand going?? What year are you this year?? I forgot!! Never mind that. Hows the family?? Lapi? Your mum and dad? Saila and Shirley and tycey?! Please say hi to them for me see ya
From Joylene your friend in australia